The tradition that the family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts?

It is true that there
are
Suggestion
is
a tendency that traditional
meals
the property of a body that causes it to have weight in a gravitational field
mass
is vanishing between members of a family. In
this
essay, we would find out the reasons why and get more knowledge about the effects of
this
trend.
we
Suggestion
We
could not deny that people are losing their family's meal because of various reasons. One of the main reasons is that we are living in a dynamic world which required more work hard. In many cases, many people too busy to accomplish their tasks at workplaces, students have
ton
Suggestion
a ton
tons
of homework to do
thesedays
Suggestion
these days
. Another reason is that food always
avaible
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
in stores and restaurants which have different reasonable prices with all people.
Therefore
, many people decide to stay in
workplace
Suggestion
the workplace
or school and have personal meals.
Additionally
, a lot of relationships with other people that need meals together to strengthen like among
bussiness
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
partners, fellows and friends.
For example
, in my career patch
,
Accept space
,
construction,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
have learnt only thing beers and meals could be a key factor to achieve successful contracts. Generally speaking, disappearing traditional meals could
emergy
come out into view, as from concealment
emerge
some negative impacts to people.
Apperantly
Suggestion
Apparently
, people have
less interactive
Suggestion
less interaction
with their
family's
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family
member which might harm for their relationship. Due to the fact that parents do not pay enough attention on their children when they do not have
time
to eat together, that could lead to some children break out of control and do bad things.
Furthermore
, as we know we could not guarantee the quality of food which we eat outside. The major concern of producers is about making profit as much as possible,
hence
, the
heahth
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
heart
of consumers could be affected.
Especically
Suggestion
Especially
, many people might go to
hospital
Suggestion
the hospital
after
ate dirty
Suggestion
eating, dirty
eating dirty
food in street.
However
, there are still some positive impacts
that
is
Suggestion
are
people could cut down on the
time
travel from workplace to home and have more
time
to relax. In conclusion,
this
trend could be harmful at some point,
thus
, people should increase the number of meals together at a certain
time
.
Submitted by Serhii Baraniuk on

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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