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Considering that adualts spend much of their lives at work, having job satisfaction is extremely important. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all employees?

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satisfaction
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 has exclusively always been peoples' essential needs right from ages. Having spent most valuable time of life at
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 as an adult,
job
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satisfaction
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 has been considered extremely important.
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 essay will discuss factors that contribute to
job
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satisfaction
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 as well as how possible is achieving it for all workers.
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although
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, there are some key factors that determine achieving
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 at
work
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 which include but not limited to; doing
job
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 that one have flair for,
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, someone who loves caring for others, decided to practice as a Nurse, it is obvious that she will be fulfilled at any contact she has with her patients or someone
,
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,
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, whose singing is his hobby, will be a great achiever being an artist.
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, people
tends
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tend
 to be extremely satisfied when they are not bossed around. Example of
this
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 is, a managing director of a company enjoys the authority attached to his
office unlike
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office, unlike
 other his subordinates he
over sees
watch and direct
oversees
 their affairs and
delegates
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delegate
 duties
for
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to
.
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in addition
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, the possibilities of achieving a
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satisfaction
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satisfying
satisfactory
 for all workers
is questioned
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are questioned
. The majority of workers in most companies are not satisfied with what they do, either they were employed for what they were not trained for,
work
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 in an
unconducive
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 environment or rather lack facilities to
executes
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execute
 their
job
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 functions effectively. These instances, will affect the majority of employees'
fulfillment
a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
 at
work
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. In summary, spending most valuable time of life at
work
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 as an employee deserve
fulfillment
a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
,
this
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 essay discussed the factors contributing to
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satisfaction
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 and why achieving
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satisfaction
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 by all workers is not certain.
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