Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council, in your letter, - Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre. - Explain the why the centre is important for the local community. - Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closed.

I am writing
this
letter to express my grave concerns about the decision of council to close the
community
centre in The Hope Town for monetary purpose.
This
decision will have
negative effect
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a negative effect
on the lives of
community
living in
this
area. I am living in The Hope Town since I was a child. My friends and I have grown up playing in
this
community
centre.
Moreover
, even now we engage ourselves in leisure activity after the busy day at work.
Additionally
, my mother and my wife take yoga lessons regularly in
this
centre. Apart from
this
, other
community
members
are
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also use
also
use
this
place in order to socialize with each other and they are often seen participating in group activities which are organised weekly at
this
place in order to break the monotony of their busy life. The children,
on the other hand
, likes to play games at
this
place as it is one of the very few safe spots left for the children.
Finally
, If the council still move ahead to demolish the building for money, it will be devastating for the
community
. I hope you will reconsider your decision and will find a better alternative for
this
situation.

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