Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council, in your letter, - Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre. - Explain the why the centre is important for the local community. - Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closed.

#council #sport #leisure #centre #money #friends #community #effects #people

I am writing

this

letter to express my grave concerns about the decision of

council

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the council

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to close the

community

centre in The Hope Town for monetary

purpose

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purposes

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This

decision will have

negative

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a negative

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effect on the lives of

community

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the community

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living in

this

area. I am living in

The

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apply

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Hope Town since I was a child. My friends and I have grown up playing in

this

community

centre.

Moreover

, even now we engage ourselves in leisure activity after

the

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busy day at work.

Additionally

, my mother and my wife take yoga lessons regularly in

this

centre. Apart from

this

, other

community

members

are

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are also using

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also

use

this

place in order to socialize with each other and they are often seen participating in group activities which are organised weekly at

this

place in order to break the monotony of their busy life. The children,

on the other hand

likes

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to play games at

this

place as it is one of the very few safe spots left for the children.

Finally

, If the council still move ahead to demolish the building for money, it will be devastating for the

community

. I hope you will reconsider your decision and will find a better alternative for

this

situation.

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