Present an argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

As we know, each
country
is growing rapidly, and competition among them are increasing day by day. Every
country
wants to be in a superior place and wants to be powerful in every stage. I strongly agree that it is the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves and wealthy nations should not share their wealth among poorer nations by providing
such
things as food and education because it starts the feeling of dependency in the citizens of poorer nations. To embark, I believe that poorer nations do not get any kind of help from rich countries because they always depend on them to fulfil their needs and desires, for illustration, there are plenty of poor countries in the world, if every
country
get
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gets
help from wealthy ones, so the
developement
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
procedure of them
remain
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remains
constant. The citizens of poorer nations
also
face some problems due to rich people because they will always rule them, If we take an example of military uses, rich countries always force the citizens of poorer nations to be a part of their army and work for them in difficult circumstances.
However
, some people
thinks
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think
wealthy nations give help to poorer ones because the
country
get an opportunity to become famous by
this
. Some nations are extremely poor and the people of these nations are
also
a human
being so
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being, so
it is fruitful for them to get help from wealthy
nations but
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nations, but
I disagree with them because it is a big task to help
poorter
deserving or inciting pity
poorer
nations and wealthy nations have some problems of
economy
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the economy
by
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with
this
, they cannot
develope
make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation
develop
their technology more so they face some difficulties to give help for them. To sum up, government of poorer nations must look after their citizens themselves because they will be independent or they will not depend on others.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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