Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Development of children is a widespread concern of parents these days.Education is the key to knowledge and growth
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Some people believe that homeschooling their kids is the best option while others are of the opinion that only when children go to school they learn and adapt. Teaching children at home is the most ideal environment for them.
This
is practiced widely in the Western countries, until the child reaches a certain grade they are taught by their parents.
This
may be sought out by most parents as they may either find the
tution
a fee paid for instruction (especially for higher education)
tuition
fee too high or to ensure the safety of their children from any kind of
harrasment
a feeling of intense annoyance caused by being tormented
harassment
.
However
, there is
a
Suggestion
an
always a dilemma in
this
aspect as others feel that it is important for children to go to school.Only
then
they learn by interacting with their peer groups, learn different values like sharing, competing, friendship, etc.They are involved in extra
curicular
of or relating to an academic course of study
curricular
activities that interests them
,
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,
this
leads to the overall improvement of children and is a healthy environment as well. In conclusion
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,
to recapitulate
although
learning from their
parents
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parents'
parent
benefits children in a certain way, it deters them from
learnin
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
how to cope up with the outside world.Educating children by sending them to school has more pros as the child has other activities as well
aprt
separated or at a distance in place or position or time
apart
from focusing on academics alone.

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