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Some universities offer online courses for students. Do you think it is a positive or negative development for students.

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Nowadays, education is becoming more and more important as a many people are opting to obtain a university degree.
Therefore
, tertiary institutions now provide E- learning courses for their students. In my opinion, I believe
this
 has brought more benefits than drawbacks
for
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to
 them. On the one hand, some people are of the
view point
a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoint
 that students who study online are
less studious
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less studied
 than those who study within the school environment.
This
 is because, there is insufficient interaction amongst them,
thus
 resulting in little or no competition. To illustrate, according to an education analyst, students who compete with their peers tend to have better grades than those who do not.
Thus
, E- students may have low grades.
However
, despite
this
 negative impact, I believe that there are many reasons why it is still more beneficial. One good reason is convenience. These days, tuition fees are becoming more expensive and so students work alongside studying in order to pay for their fees. Studying online would help them balance their time between working and studying.
In addition
, one can study
at
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in
 the comfort of his or her home. Most universities are located
at
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in
 isolated areas or most times
at
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on
 the outskirts of cities.
As a result
, students have to go through the stress of having to endure traffic everyday in order to get to school.
This
 is very stressful to some, so they opt for the better option of studying at home. In conclusion, online studying has brought more good than harm to students because it is more convenient for many in
this
 busy world of today,
therefore
, it should be encouraged.
however measures
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However, measures
However measures
 should be taken to ensure
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the E
- students end up with good grades.
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