The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given pie
graph
shows a survey of Britain visitors which are
classification
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a classification
by types of facilities in the year 1999. A glance at the
graph
reveals that
visitor
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the visitor
visitors
choosed
pick out, select, or choose from a number of alternatives
chose
chooses
choose
two main place
theme
parks and museums and
gallaries
spectators at a golf or tennis match
galleries
.
Moreover
, The proportion of
Theme
Parks especially
seperated
being or feeling set or kept apart from others
separated
five subgroups
;
Accept space
;
blackpool
a resort town in Lancashire in northwestern England on the Irish Sea; famous for its tower
Blackpool
pleasure beach, Alton Towers, Pleasureland, Southport, Chessington World of Adventures and
legolad
,
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,
Windsor. It is clear from the data
,
Accept space
,
Wild parks and zoos did not
prefered
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among visitors by %9.
However
, The Parks and Museums
,
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,
Galleries hold
majority
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the majority
a majority
of graphs. The
Theme
Parks most
prefered
more desirable than another
preferred
places in
britain
a monarchy in northwestern Europe occupying most of the British Isles; divided into England and Scotland and Wales and Northern Ireland; 'Great Britain' is often used loosely to refer to the United Kingdom
Britain
, there was
slight
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slightly
more
visitor
than
musems
a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
museums
and galleries. The museums and
Gallaries
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gallery
galleries
second
biggest part of
graph
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the graph
a graph
,
Accept space
,
Although
it covered roughly as equal as
theme
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a theme park
park
, it could not hold
graph
more than
theme
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a theme park
theme parks
park
.
in
Suggestion
In
addition the historic house moderate visitors by 16 percent. The
theme
park
divided 5 subgroups according to
graph
.
the
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The
vast majority of
visitor
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visitors
passed time
in
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at
on
blackpool
a resort town in Lancashire in northwestern England on the Irish Sea; famous for its tower
Blackpool
pleassure
a fundamental feeling that is hard to define but that people desire to experience
pleasure
beach. Small number of
visitor
Suggestion
visitors
choosed
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choose
chooses
chose
legoland
Suggestion
Legoland
by 10%.
in
Suggestion
In
conclusion,
theme
park
and museums and galleries the most visited places.
otherwise
Suggestion
Otherwise
theme
park
divided subgroups, museums and galleries could be the most visited
facility
Suggestion
facilities
in
britain
a monarchy in northwestern Europe occupying most of the British Isles; divided into England and Scotland and Wales and Northern Ireland; 'Great Britain' is often used loosely to refer to the United Kingdom
Britain
.

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