The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given pie

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shows a survey of Britain visitors which are

classification

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by types of facilities in the year 1999. A glance at the

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reveals that

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visitors

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visitor

choosed

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chose

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two main

place

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places

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theme

parks

and

museums

and

gallaries

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galleries

.

Moreover

, The proportion of

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Parks

especially

seperated

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separated

five

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subgroups ;

blackpool

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pleasure beach, Alton Towers, Pleasureland, Southport, Chessington World of Adventures and

legolad

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Legoland

Legolas

,Windsor. It is clear from the data , Wild

parks

and zoos did not

prefered

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preferred

among visitors by %9.

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, The

Parks

and

Museums

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Museum

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,

Galleries

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and Galleries

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hold

majority

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the majority

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of graphs.

The

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apply

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Parks

most prefered places in

britain

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, there was

slight

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more

visitor

than

musems

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museums

and

galleries

. The

museums

and

Gallaries

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second

biggest part of

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the graph

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,

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covered roughly as equal as

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a theme

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park

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parks

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,

it

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could not hold

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more than

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a theme

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park

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parks

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.

in addition

the historic house moderate visitors by 16

percent

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per cent

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. The

theme

park

divided

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is divided

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5

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subgroups

according to

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. the vast majority of

visitor

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visitors

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passed time in

blackpool

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pleassure

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pleasure

beach.

Small

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number of

visitor

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visitors

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choosed

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chose

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legoland

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Legoland

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by 10%. in conclusion,

theme

park

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parks

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and

museums

and

galleries

the

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are the

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most visited places.

otherwise

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,otherwise

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theme

park

divided subgroups,

museums

and

galleries

could be the most visited facility in

britain

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.