When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion
It is stated that when a nation advanced in
technology
, many of the old skills fade out and certain aspects of our Use synonyms
life
disappear. I admit that Use synonyms
technology
effect our natural talent and the way of Use synonyms
living
Accept comma addition
living, however
however
, I don’t support the idea of forgetting those skills.
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thenology
is the way to the future and it is the right path for country to the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
porcues
and many obtain by purchase; acquire by means of a financial transaction
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field
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fields
revlotionized
via the use of change radically
revolutionized
revolutionised
technology
. Use synonyms
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, mail service Linking Words
is being replace
by Email as it is more Suggestion
replaces
has replaced
is replacing
convienent
and instantly suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
deliever
bring to a destination, make a delivery
deliver
delivers
delivered
messagese
in a matter of seconds to a communication (usually brief) that is written or spoken or signaled
messages
message
any where
in the world with internet access. at or in or to any place
anywhere
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instead
of written invoice via post.Linking Words
Additionally
, telecommunication system has advanced and connected places with Linking Words
fast speed network
where you can use a cell phone to call any destination in the world Suggestion
a fast speed network
the fast speed network
efficentally
.
In spite of with efficiency; in an efficient manner
efficiently
this
, I don’t agree that Linking Words
thecnology
should be allowed to kill old skills and the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
life
. Use synonyms
Technology
must be Use synonyms
utlized
to aid those skills and easy our put to use
utilized
utilised
life
. To Use synonyms
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, being able to communicate electronically should not be a replacement for gathering and interactive socially. marked by complexity and richness of detail
elaborate
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, software and hardware should be Linking Words
utlize
as a tool to help humans do their work more put to use
utilized
utilize
utilised
efficintlly but
not to replace the human themselves as Accept comma addition
efficiently, but
efficiently but
this
will make their skill expired as it not being Linking Words
use
which will Suggestion
used
eventully
be lost.
To sum up, after an unspecified period of time or an especially long delay
eventually
technology
is required is the twenty Use synonyms
first
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centeruy
as it open endless possibilities, a period of 100 years
century
never the less
it should be treated as a tool to assist humans not as a replacement of their skills and despite anything to the contrary (usually following a concession)
nevertheless
life
living.Use synonyms
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