When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

It is stated that when a nation advanced in

technology

, many of the old skills fade out and certain aspects of our

life

disappear. I admit that

technology

effect our natural talent and the way of

living

Accept comma addition

living, however

however

, I don’t support the idea of forgetting those skills. One the

first

hand,

thenology

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

is the way to the future and it is the right path for country to

porcues

obtain by purchase; acquire by means of a financial transaction

purchase

and many

field

Suggestion

fields

could be

revlotionized

change radically

revolutionized

revolutionised

via the use of

technology

.

For instance

, mail service

is being replace

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replaces

has replaced

is replacing

by Email as it is more

convienent

suited to your comfort or purpose or needs

convenient

and instantly

deliever

bring to a destination, make a delivery

deliver

delivers

delivered

messagese

a communication (usually brief) that is written or spoken or signaled

messages

message

in a matter of seconds to

any where

at or in or to any place

anywhere

in the world with internet access.

Subsequently

, many companies send service bill to their customer via email

instead

of written invoice via post.

Additionally

, telecommunication system has advanced and connected places with

fast speed network

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a fast speed network

the fast speed network

where you can use a cell phone to call any destination in the world

efficentally

with efficiency; in an efficient manner

efficiently

. In spite of

this

, I don’t agree that

thecnology

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

should be allowed to kill old skills and

life

.

Technology

must be

utlized

put to use

utilized

utilised

to aid those skills and easy our

life

. To

illabroute

marked by complexity and richness of detail

elaborate

, being able to communicate electronically should not be a replacement for gathering and interactive socially.

Moreover

, software and hardware should be

utlize

put to use

utilized

utilize

utilised

as a tool to help humans do their work more

efficintlly but

Accept comma addition

efficiently, but

efficiently but

not to replace the human themselves as

this

will make their skill expired as it not being

use

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used

which will

eventully

after an unspecified period of time or an especially long delay

eventually

be lost. To sum up,

technology

is required is the twenty

first

centeruy

a period of 100 years

century

as it open endless possibilities,

never the less

despite anything to the contrary (usually following a concession)

nevertheless

it should be treated as a tool to assist humans not as a replacement of their skills and

life

living.