Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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promoting or enhancing well-being
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modern world
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the modern world
a modern world
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belived
accept as true; take to be true
believed
beloved
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the act of examining resemblances
comparison
to others
subject
history
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the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experiences
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making light of
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a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
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school
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to
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and
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Techonology. So that Science and Technology ought to be most important
school
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than
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