Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It is correctly said that computers can make computers every individual's
life
more easier
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easier
easiest
and less stressful. But some people believe that computers make the person's
life
more complicated. I strongly agree that with the
invension
the creation of something in the mind
invention
intention
of computers can make
life
more better
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better
and
more easy
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easier
more easily
.
This
eassy
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
will discuss about how computers make people's
life
more easier and convenient.
First
of all, computers are
using
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used
in every phase
ofhuman's
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of human's
life
. Without computers man's
life
become
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becomes
stagnant.
For instance
, almost all the big and small companies are using computers.
However
, their official records,
updates and
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updates, and
all
funtions
(mathematics) a mathematical relation such that each element of a given set (the domain of the function) is associated with an element of another set (the range of the function)
functions
fountains
are maintained through the computers.
Also it
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Also, it
arranges meetings and communicating with different people are made possible only through computers.
Secondly
,
through
(postpositive) however
though
computers people are
using inernet
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also using the internet
using the internet also
using internet also
also
. Because of using
internet
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the internet
, things are getting more easily. The world
become
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has become
becomes
is becoming
more closer
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closer
.
Besides
,
internet
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the internet
can provide lots of
informations
a message received and understood
information
which
are
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is
very useful in every human's day-to-day
life
.
Thirdly
, card payment is
also
made more
convinient
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
of human's
life
only through the using of computer.
For example
, when someone
buy
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buys
something from various stores using apps, in
this
case
also
they can use card payment by using computers. Different types of bills can be made by it. Fourthly, another foremost causes of using
computer
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a computer
the computer
computers
is that it stores lots of data for future use.
Besides
, people can download various films, songs and other things these
wuold
marked by extreme lack of restraint or control
wild
relex
become less tense, rest, or take one's ease
relax
their mind. To sum up, I think by seeing the various uses of computers, it can be said that it made the
life
of people more
convinient
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
, easy,
tensionfree
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tension free
and
relaxaing
affording physical or mental rest
relaxing
.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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