Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
 To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Humans
Suggestion
Human
waste
is a trending topic in today world
environment
Suggestion
environmental
issues. It is argued by some people that authorities must set regulations and penalties to force more recycling
from
Suggestion
of
household
waste
. I do not agree that law is the only way to encourage more recycling.
To begin
with, a system must be built to segregate
waste
and people must be encouraged to use it from their early ages, perhaps parents and
education system
Suggestion
the education system
an education system
can be involved to put
this
vital habit into
younger generation
Suggestion
the younger generation
as they grow up it will become natural in their
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
.
For example
, in Dubai city they developed a system of vending machines for plastic
bottles
Suggestion
bottle
disposal where the citizens can create an account which keeps a record of the number and reward the top ten people with gifts.
Moreover
, a similar initiative in Sudan was established by
ministry
Suggestion
the ministry
of education where
student
Suggestion
students
the student
participate in an activity to collect recycled items from their surrounded
neighborhoods
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhoods
and specialized companies will collect it and give the student session about the recycling process. On the other hands, the government and the society committees could set rules and steps to control
waste
disposal and punish those who does not follow
it
Suggestion
it, hence they
hence
they can be an example for others.
For instance
, in China rules are set by
cities municipality
Accept comma addition
cities, municipality
to penalty citizens who does not put
waste
in their dedicated container categorized by item type.
As a result
, the statistic of
waste
recycling increased significantly every year. To sum up, homes
waste
is a major concern, a cooperative action must be taken by both authorities and within society for better recycling.

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