Some people think that it's always better to live in the rented accomodation. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of it.

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Accomodation is
one
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of the
rudemantary
being or involving basic facts or principles
rudimentary
needs of the mankind, whether it is owned or rented. There are people who have the notion that they must own a
house
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while others think it is best to live in the rented
accomodations
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
. The merits and demerits of a rented
accomodation
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
are enumerated in the following paragraphs. Why it is beneficial to rent a
house
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rather than owning a
house
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?
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and foremost merit of living in a rented
house
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is the tenants do not have the burden of maintenance of the building which on its counterpart is the biggest worry.
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, the painting of the
house
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or any leakage of the
pipelines etc
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pipelines, etc.
pipelines etc.
are the responsibilities of the owner of the
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house
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house, although
although
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sometimes tenants have to pay a limited amount of money for
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according to the agreement.
Secondly
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rented accomodation is best suited for individuals who are working far away from their home and
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got transferred from
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place to another frequently.
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, my cousin who works for a multinational company in Thailand got transferred to Singapore recently and it was very easy for him to move because of the rented rented
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.
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, there are two main demerits of living in a rented
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.
Firstly
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the restrictions imposed by the owner
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as Limited use of water and electricity, time
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, prohibition on loud music and arranging parties at home.
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Secondly sometimes
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Secondly, sometimes
owners can
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give the sudden notice to vacate the
house
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within a specific period of time and it could be very difficult to find a new place to move to, on
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a short notice as
one
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has to consider a number of factors before moving to a new home. To conclude, I would say as an old adage goes "Every coin has two sides", there are both pros and cons of living in a rented accommodation as
one
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has to be careful while choosing the type of accommodation that he or she needs.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation
  • mortgage
  • down payment
  • maintenance
  • equity
  • investment
  • restrictions
  • lease
  • appreciate
  • commitment
  • upfront costs
  • residential stability
  • property market
  • rental agreement
  • tenancy
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