Some people think that it's always better to live in the rented accomodation. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of it.

Accomodation is
one
of the
rudemantary
being or involving basic facts or principles
rudimentary
needs of the mankind, whether it is owned or rented. There are people who have the notion that they must own a
house
while others think it is best to live in the rented
accomodations
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
. The merits and demerits of a rented
accomodation
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
are enumerated in the following paragraphs. Why it is beneficial to rent a
house
rather than owning a
house
?
First
and foremost merit of living in a rented
house
is the tenants do not have the burden of maintenance of the building which on its counterpart is the biggest worry.
For instance
, the painting of the
house
or any leakage of the
pipelines etc
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pipelines, etc.
pipelines etc.
are the responsibilities of the owner of the
house
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house, although
although
sometimes tenants have to pay a limited amount of money for
such
according to the agreement.
Secondly
rented accomodation is best suited for individuals who are working far away from their home and
also
got transferred from
one
place to another frequently.
For example
, my cousin who works for a multinational company in Thailand got transferred to Singapore recently and it was very easy for him to move because of the rented rented
house
.
On the contrary
, there are two main demerits of living in a rented
house
.
Firstly
the restrictions imposed by the owner
such
as Limited use of water and electricity, time
boundations
, prohibition on loud music and arranging parties at home.
Secondly sometimes
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Secondly, sometimes
owners can
also
give the sudden notice to vacate the
house
within a specific period of time and it could be very difficult to find a new place to move to, on
such
a short notice as
one
has to consider a number of factors before moving to a new home. To conclude, I would say as an old adage goes "Every coin has two sides", there are both pros and cons of living in a rented accommodation as
one
has to be careful while choosing the type of accommodation that he or she needs.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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