Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts, and that this money should be spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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The question of whether

government

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should keep funding the arts remains a very

controverial

marked by or capable of arousing controversy

controversial

topic. Some are of the opinion that it is a wasteful practice that should be frowned upon. I totally disagree with

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notion. In my opinion, money spent on the arts

isan

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is an

investment

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for

the preservation of a Nation's culture and heritage as well as a means of generating revenue Many countries are known for specific arts. These arts are

mbedded

enclosed firmly in a surrounding mass

embedded

in the way of life of the people and it remains a significant part of their history. Most

art

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galleries as well as

exhibition centres

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the exhibition centres

cannot thrive on private funding alone because they do not have the resources the

government

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has to put

check

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checks

and balances in place to protect these pieces.

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the biggest

art

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center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

in the world is a

government

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owned facility in

France where

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France, where

thousands of acres were dedicated to keeping and

also

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developing various forms of Arts. Large scale achievements

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as these are not possible without

government

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money. The

art

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world as well as its tourism remains a major source of revenue for governments globally. It is a very profitable venture. Money is spent to make more money and the arts should not be an exception.

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, the Nike

art

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gallery in Lagos serves not only as an exhibition centre but as a tourist attraction that generates a great deal of revenue for the state through exhibitions and entrance fees. Experts have shown that all forms of

art

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are even more profitable than healthcare and information technology. In conclusion, the arts remain a vital part of every society. It should be placed on the same level as

healthcare

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health care

and technological advancements. In my opinion, I believe that it is not wasteful spending for governments to fund the arts compared to other fields

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as transportation and education.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

310 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

enriching society
promoting cultural understanding
development of talent
creative industries
economic benefits
generate revenue
cultural heritage
identity
prioritize spending
needs of the majority

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Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts, and that this money should be spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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