Nowadays parents put too much of pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?
Parenting is a critical
course when
comes to their overall progress of children in terms of an Accept comma addition
course, when
education
, career and settlement, etc. Due to this
phenomenon parents are imposing a lot of pressure in order to achieve the maximum possible success in their life. In my opinion, with this
progression of imposing un-necessary things on kid’s only drawbacks comes in
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with
plate
as results.
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a plate
To begin
with, the majority parents want to keep their children ahead of package
, Suggestion
the package
such
as the education
, career and an overall success in settlement. In order to fulfill
their concerns, they used to impose a tremendous pressure on kids about an put in effect
fulfil
education
to get the good
marks and a proper job etc. Suggestion
better
For example
, a survey conducted by the Unicef Inc. in
2015 in relation to “Causes of Stress in Children”, and Suggestion
In
results
were extremely shocking. In most of the similar cases, around 2/3 times the parents are completely responsible for stress in children which result in poor all in all progress of a child.
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the results
In addition
to this
, another aspect of this
issue need to be noted which is too severe as, kids commit suicide due to unbearable burden
by guardians. They are pushed to their limits to give their best in the life. Suggestion
the unbearable burden
For instance
, a continuation of a same survey Unicef Inc. illustrate
one more downside of Suggestion
Illustrate
this
issue called “Mental Illness” and the reasons were same as above.
In conclusion, by imposing extreme burden on children will only affect them in terms of education
, mental health, difficulty in relations with parents and career etc. In my opinion, with this
strategy parents will get only adverse effect
on their children.
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the only adverse effect
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