The table below show the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given table
provide
Suggestion
provides
information about the numbers of people who visited Ashdown Museum before and after the refurbished process that happened in the museum while the supplied pie charts measure the level of satisfaction of the visitors in
both
times. Overall, comparing
both
pie charts, it is clear that the percentage of visitors who are pleased increased significantly while the dissatisfaction level decreased.
As a result
the number of visitors became more which can be seen in the supplied table. Before the enhancement, the visitors who voted satisfied was almost a
third
of the total visitors while 15% voted extremely satisfied
in
Suggestion
with
the survey. Meanwhile, high figure of 40% shows dissatisfaction and one tenth very dissatisfied. A tiny proportion of visitors did not participate in the survey.
On the other hand
, the development almost doubled the guests who were very happy while satisfied portion increased by 10% reaching 40%.
By contrast
,
both
dissatisfied and very dissatisfied dropped substantially to 15% and 10% respectively. Comparing
both
pie charts, the proportion of guests with no response stood at 5% in
in
Suggestion
at
between
both
times.
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