The table below show the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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provide

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information about the

numbers

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number

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of people who visited Ashdown Museum before and after the

refurbished

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process that happened in the museum

while

the supplied pie charts measure the level of satisfaction of the

visitors

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at

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both

times.

Overall

, comparing

both

pie charts,

it is clear that

the percentage of

visitors

who are pleased increased significantly

while

the dissatisfaction level decreased.

As a

result

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the number of

visitors

became

more

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apply

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which can be seen in the supplied table. Before the enhancement, the

visitors

who voted satisfied

was

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were

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almost a

third

of the total

visitors

while

15% voted extremely satisfied in the survey. Meanwhile,

high

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figure of 40% shows dissatisfaction and

one tenth

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very

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dissatisfied. A tiny proportion of

visitors

did not participate in the survey.

On the other hand

, the development almost doubled the

guests

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number of guests

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who were very happy

while

satisfied

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the satisfied

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portion increased by 10% reaching 40%.

By contrast

,

both

dissatisfied and very dissatisfied dropped substantially to 15% and 10% respectively. Comparing

both

pie charts, the proportion of guests with no response stood at 5%

in in

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both

times.