Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is generally argued that provision of
variety
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a variety
of sports facilities is the best measure to improve public
health
.
However
, others claim that additional measures are needed
since
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for
increased
number
of sports facilities would have minimal impact on
health
of
public
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the public
. I believe that both of these arguments are correct and a combination of both will provide better results in terms of public
health
. Providing facilities like cycling, development of jogging tracks and increased
number
of fitness centres is a mandatory step towards better community
health
.
This
will lure the general public into adopting
habit
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the habit
habits
of regular exercise.
For example
, it is usually observed that residents of developed countries are more keen in taking regular exercise as compared to
people
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the people
of
developing world
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the developing world
.
This
is mainly due to increased
number
of sports facilities.
On the other hand
,
however
, another school of thought proposes that additional measures are
also
needed. These may include running of advertisements on
bill boards
large outdoor signboard
billboards
, controlled sale of fast food items and carbonated beverages.
In addition
,
availability
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the availability
of state-of-the-art
health
facilities is equally as important.
For instance
, welfare states like Denmark have an established system of combination of public awareness, controlled sale of food products and a well developed
health
system.
Therefore
, overall
health
status of
people
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the people
of Denmark is appreciable. To conclude, I think that the best way towards improved level of community
health
is
imcreased
made greater in size or amount or degree
increased
number
of sports facilities along with other measure like better
health
care system and controlled sale of edibles. A combination of both of these proposals will ensure a healthy general public
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