Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is generally argued that provision of

variety

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a variety

of sports facilities is the best measure to improve public

health

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.

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, others claim that additional measures are needed

since

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for

increased

number

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of sports facilities would have minimal impact on

health

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of

public

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the public

. I believe that both of these arguments are correct and a combination of both will provide better results in terms of public

health

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. Providing facilities like cycling, development of jogging tracks and increased

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of fitness centres is a mandatory step towards better community

health

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.

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will lure the general public into adopting

habit

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the habit

habits

of regular exercise.

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, it is usually observed that residents of developed countries are more keen in taking regular exercise as compared to

people

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the people

of

developing world

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the developing world

.

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is mainly due to increased

number

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of sports facilities.

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,

however

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, another school of thought proposes that additional measures are

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needed. These may include running of advertisements on

bill boards

large outdoor signboard

billboards

, controlled sale of fast food items and carbonated beverages.

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,

availability

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the availability

of state-of-the-art

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facilities is equally as important.

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, welfare states like Denmark have an established system of combination of public awareness, controlled sale of food products and a well developed

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system.

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, overall

health

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status of

people

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the people

of Denmark is appreciable. To conclude, I think that the best way towards improved level of community

health

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is

imcreased

made greater in size or amount or degree

increased

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of sports facilities along with other measure like better

health

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care system and controlled sale of edibles. A combination of both of these proposals will ensure a healthy general public