You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter • explain why you changed jobs • describe your new job • tell him/her your other news.

Dear Sandra, I'
m
just writing to let you know that, that I am currently working with a new company in Abuja. You’ve given a clear purpose for writing, well done. You'd must be wondering, why the sudden change of
job
, knowing fully full well that I'd barely spent
a year on in
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a year on
my previous
job
one. But, the reason is not far-fetched as I'd to I’ve
relocate
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relocated
relocated from Lagos to Abuja to move in with my boyfriend.
boyfriend
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Boyfriend
!
(
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Use an exclamation mark to show you are excited about
this
news) You’ve covered the bullet point well.
However
, be careful of the language you use, which is inaccurate at times. I'
m
currently working with in a small law firm. Wired Weird, right? As you know I'
m
not a fan of court dealings. But, before quitting my other
job
, I thought of delving
looking
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looked
into a new career. I knew I
know
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knew
Knowing so little about legislation,
this
made me apply for the
job
of a computer analyst with a law firm.
and
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And
Which I
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Which, I
know, while working here, I would will gain at least some legislative knowledge. You’ve covered the bullet point,
although
you’ve more talked about why you took that
job
in particular
rather than actually describing it. Again, some language inaccuracies reduce clarity. Talking about my boyfriend, you won't believe
it but
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it, but
he proposed proposed!
This
happened
last
week Friday while we were chilling at the club. I was flabbergasted as he went down on one knee and
spilled
write or name the letters that comprise the conventionally accepted form of (a word or part of a word)
spelled
out those words "will you marry me". So, I'
m
inviting you to Abuja for my wedding
next
month. I would ensure I’ll make sure you get the details of the event as soon as possible. Best wishes.
Bukol
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