People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?

In
today's world knowledge
Suggestion
today's world, knowledge
is the wealth, the source of the knowledge
acquires
Suggestion
is acquired
through education. People are getting smart to choose
carrier
Suggestion
a carrier
the carrier
with their interest and joining the colleges related to the course. Olden days University used to have limited
cources
the person or thing chosen or selected
choices
courses
special focusing on Maths, Science
,
Accept space
,
Arts. But now it's entire different we have
hundereds
being ten more than ninety
hundreds
of sources like Hotel management. Example a person who is interested in cooking make special dishes are willing to join in college and making their interest as
carrier
Suggestion
the carrier
a carrier
because it
makes them to learn
Suggestion
makes them learn
not only
cooking but
Accept comma addition
cooking, but
also
many things like hospitality, managing a restaurant, quality, gaining knowledge to cook healthy food etc.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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