Many things that used to be done in home by hands are now being done by machines .does this development brings more advantages or disadvantages

Things which were previously done manually are now being performed mechanically.
Drawbacks
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The drawbacks
of
this
mechanical
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
are eclipsed by its numerous advantages.
This
essay will discuss how positives like
time
saving and efficiency of machines overshadowed the negative of human addiction to mechanical
work
.
To begin
, the most common drawback of modern machinery is developing human dependence upon them. Now a days machines of all sorts
have been invented
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has been invented
to perform all household chores, due to which people prefer to get all their jobs done by machines without their effort and hard
work
.
This
consequently effect
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consequently affects
consequently affect
their
physically fitness they
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physical fitness, they
physical fitness they
eventually start getting
wait
wetness caused by water
wet
and become obese.
For example
, people in the past used to clean their house with the help of
broom
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a broom
and mop which is now replaced by advanced vacuum cleaner with require less struggle and
time
.
Hence
, people are now
become
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becoming
lazy
,
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,
fat and predisposed to illnesses. Taking
in
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into
account the advantages,
firstly
, performing chores via machines help us to save
time
.
Accept space
.
In
this
world of increasing professionalism machines act as
blessing
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a blessing
in disguise specially for women as they can complete their tasks quickly.
Therefore they
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Therefore, they
manage to have some ample
time
in which they can relax and take care of their family.
For instance
with the launch of automatic
dish washer
a machine for washing dishes
dishwasher
and washing machine in near past people are way much relieved as they
work
independently and fast.
Secondly
, tasks done by machines are more efficient, while manually performed tasks contain errors because humans are prone to mistakes while computerized
work
is more accurate due to
installed
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installing
software in it. It is exemplified by pizza maker that bakes pizza in quite less
time
with perfect temperature management which is beyond human capacity. I conclude, accuracy and quickness of machines over weigh the negative of human mechanical dependency.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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