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Each year, the crime rate increase. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity.

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When it comes to
crimination
a final climactic stage
culmination
, we witness a surge in the amount of criminal activities annually. There are a variety of criminal motivations that actually lead to deadly sins, from which some solutions must be executed to turn over the situation.
In
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At
 the beginning,
reasons
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the reasons
 for people to commit crimes can be classified into two distinctive categories.
Firstly
, criminals share the similarity of having difficult lives. They can’t stand being in those miserable backgrounds any longer.
As a result
, they may rob some money or doing dirty things for others to receive immediate payment that can change their circumstances. The
second
 reason is that they have mental problems which make them lose their morality. They can hardly tell what is right and what is wrong and just do what they want. In some cases, they are diagnosed as mental patients.
Therefore
, in order to reduce the crime rate, actions
from
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of
authorities
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the authorities
 must be taken. The very
first
 thing government need to do is to care about the basic living condition of the people. They need to reduce the gap between society classes and subsidize for the poor.
Secondly
, since the spreading of many mental illnesses, we should help those patients to get treatments
such
 as mental therapies,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
… in spite of avoiding them.
Moreover
, we need to
do inform
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do, inform
 about those
illness
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illnesses
 to everyone so that people all aware of the mental health. In conclusion, when we understand that criminal activities occur because of the criminals’ struggling backgrounds or their mental illnesses, both government and the whole society can interpret from the root to prevent the crimes.
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