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Economic growth and development are usually considered to be beneficial both for individuals and for society as a whole. Do the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Economic growth is a vital element which has to be focused on to for the betterment of the society on a large scale, and that which is really very important that has to happen in today's World. Population is increasing continuously, whereas the resources are not adequately supplied. Many necessities like food, clothing, shelter, etc.,
also
 has become too miserable due to lack of economic growth. Gradually, job opportunities declined, resulting in poor financial stability, less chances of satisfying family needs. I
As a result
, human life gets hampered which was impacted in a very negative manner. Government has to take
actions
Suggestion
action
, implement new ventures to develop the
state creating
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state, creating
 multiple paths of businesses. New techniques in farming, booming the real estate market, decreasing the prices for a specific time, tax evasion, improved medical facilities and educational standards at
fesible
capable of being done with means at hand and circumstances as they are
feasible
 costs, and
like wise
in like or similar manner
likewise
, are few steps that the public has to look into. Many-a-times,
such
 enriching wipes
off
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of
 the disadvantages met, due to the low productivity.
Additionally
, bringing in modifications in the various fields like medicine,
iinfrastructure
the basic structure or features of a system or organization
infrastructure
i infrastructure
, minerals, ores, human resources and all shall result in healthy Country.
Submitted by Mrs. Sumira Vempati on

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