Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Entry fees for a
museaum
a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
museum
is often considered an outrageous thing by most people. But, I strongly contend against free entry. There must a be a check, a tiny
fees
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fee
may be, but it should be there. In
this
essay, I am going to put some views against free admission and the reason for the same.
Although
, I will
also
discuss what made people think
otherwise
. Museums are places where history speaks for itself. Visiting a
meseaum
a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
museum
, a person can easily understand the culture of the nation, rich past,
stuggle
an energetic attempt to achieve something
struggle
,
achievments
the action of accomplishing something
achievements
, people, language and innumerable list of things. Maintaining a
mesueam
a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
museum
is not a child’s play.
Goverments
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Governments
and
pulic
not private; open to or concerning the people as a whole
public
agencies spend a fortune to upkeep a
museam
a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
museum
. So, charging
a
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an
admission fees will definitely help make the
museum
self sustained. The
second
big benefit would be that people with genuine interest will only visit the
museum
making it filled with interested, curious group of people.
On the contrary
, some people argue that
museum
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the museum
is a public place and everybody has a right to visit it. With entry fees, nobody will ever visit a
museam
a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
museum
making the very purpose of a
museum
void
.
Accept space
.
Concluding
this
, it has been observed many times that the items which are free to use often
misutilized
.
This
can be proven right in the case of
museum
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the museum
museums
too. So, it is always advisable to charge a
fees
Suggestion
fee
to help people understand the
worth
everything that exists anywhere
world
of the
museum
. Though, it will be better if the fees can be relaxed for
certain group
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certain groups
a certain group
of public like old age and school children.
Submitted by patisudhansu on

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