Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

A large
number
of languages are becoming extinct by every passing year. Some believe that it is not significant since life will be comfortable with limited languages in the world.
This
essay agrees to have lesser
number
of languages. Some argue that fewer languages can make
world
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the world
more relax to live. Reducing
number
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the number
of languages can significantly lower the clashes happening among different speaking groups. The political leaders spread hatred and discriminate another group based on their mother tongue,
hence
disturbing
harmony
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the harmony
of a country. Recently, a Maharastrian politician had demanded reservation in the government jobs for
Marathi speaking population
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a Marathi speaking population
the Marathi speaking population
rather than merit based recruitment.
Therefore
, it
lead
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leads
to mob lynching and violence in different communities. A single language can be a potential solution to eradicate
such
type of incidences. Though different languages are cultural
heritage but
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heritage, but
it should not be preserved at the cost of human lives.
Additionally
, many people believe that
lesser
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a lesser number
number
of languages helps promote tourism. Many a times, it is observed that communication barrier discourages people from visiting unknown land. As, they face a lot of difficulties in local transportation, accommodation and
site
an instance of visual perception
sight
seeing.
Also
,
this
leaves behind any opportunity to make friends. North
Indians mostly
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Indians, mostly
stay away from travelling to Tamil Nadu, a Tamil speaking state, wherein only regional language is being preferred by everyone.
Thus
, it is not
consider
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considered
as a visitor friendly region. If people try to learn other languages in
this
area,
such
situation can be prevented, but it appears far from reality for
state
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the state
like Tamil Nadu. In conclusion, multiple languages are important to carry forward legacy of forefathers.
However
, I strongly believe that a decreasing
number
of languages
accrues
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accrue
high
number
benefits that makes a peaceful society where everyone can enjoy their vacation wherever they want.
Submitted by prakashpurohit8065 on

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