Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have a health problem as a result. Why to many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Of late, reports are suggesting that, obesity and other
issues have been
at a rapid speed in working professionals especially in white
a band that fits around the neck and is usually folded over
employees. The main reason behind
is, they do not get adequate workouts and do not spend enough time to do so. I shall discuss my views on
and foremost, employees do spend
good amount
a good amount
of time to complete their task and few might even take longer periods to finish the work, which has been assigned to them. And in non-working hours they would like to spend their time
what they desire.
For example
, enjoying with either families or friends or by doing their passionate works.
, few professionals may think that they reached to the level what they wanted to be and
as a result
they stop doing the workouts. To overcome
this issues
this issue
these issues
, both employers and employees should take necessary actions.
, employers had to install gym and other workout equipment’s in the work environment.
, employers should
setup awareness campaigns and they should explain the
benefits of doing exercise.
The employees
, have to monitor their body mass index at regular intervals and if there are any changes in their
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body, then
they should immediately consider to start either running or any other workout activities. They could even
start playing few
start playing a few
start playing little
start playing little little
games like badminton, tennis or any outdoor games.
would reduce the fat content in the body. Being healthy should be the highest priority to any one, after all
is wealth. To overcome the
hazards in working
professionals both
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professionals, both
employers and employees should work hand in hand.
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