Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.What is your opinion about this?

It is widely argued that keeping houses and workplaces well-organized is extremely essential. While
such
a positive tendency would bring upon a plethora of unrivalled benefits, I think that it is not always necessary to keep everything in at
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of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
correct place. On the one hand, keeping homes and offices tidy and neat is a novel idea an idea to be appreciated. Organizing house would play a pivotal role in making us feel comfortable because messy environment is always distracting and distressing. In Fact, living in untidy places would cost not only precious
time but
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time, but
great effort which would be squandered searching for items
such
as keys, tiny tools and even money.
Therefore
, it is not surprising that a large cross-section of people
often delay
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often delays
doing crucial tasks
such
as studying or exercising as a the result
of of
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of
their unjustified chaotic lifestyle.
In addition
, the messy work place could be disastrous as well, especially in the medical field. If patients' records, prescriptions, dates of operations and drugs were not kept arranged in a logical way in which they could be accessed when needed,
this
would
more likely
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most likely
lead to detrimental repercussions which would not only cost large sums of money, but would
also
cost lives. In
such
a field, wasting time looking for these is certainly unacceptable.
On the other hand
, I
also
think that, sometimes it is required to keep
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a channel along the eaves or on the roof; collects and carries away rainwater
gutter
property
reach
people who have possessions and wealth (considered as a group)
rich
rather than arranging them in their proper places. The fact that, when it comes to frequent usage, it is even better for items to be saved
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at what time? "When are you coming home?"
when
they could be easily found. Since I am interested in reading, I prefer keeping my books and novels nearby on the kitchen table, the garden or even in my vehicle,
instead
of returning them to the bookshelf.
Although
these are not in the right place, I do not see something wrong in
this
arrangement as it helps me to practice my hobby conveniently. In conclusion, even though keeping things in
correct places
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the correct places
is advantageous, in my perspective, there are some items that could be exempted from keeping in a well-organized way.
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