Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do different kinds of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It
is believe
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is believed
by some that individuals must opt for change by shifting their current jobs with new one. In my opinion, I believe that,
although
there are disadvantages of
this
trend, but career grooming and refreshing them is essential for
masses
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the masses
.
Therefore
, a shift is the utmost demand of today’s life. Certainly, there is plethora of benefits of changing employment.
Firstly
, a person would gain more experience and knowledge of his domain.
For instance
, an employee working in a software house with only few co-workers must apply for well reputed multinational companies to gain a variety of skills.
Consequently
, people would learn more technicalities of their domain.
Secondly
, everyone
want
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wants
to break with their old routine as working in the same environment for years and doing predictable work for a long time would make them extremely bore and lazy. To illustrate, masses with 8-5 jobs must switch to virtual and remote jobs as it would give them a totally different feel.
On the other hand
, changing career
also
has
few issues
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a few issues
. An individual would feel it reluctant to replace their work with
new one
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a new one
new ones
the new one
as they have got expertise in their work. Take,
for example
, programmer developing websites
from
Suggestion
for
years would resist to opt for a lecturer job.
Moreover
, adjustment
with
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to
new environment would be another problem. One would find it difficult connecting with new people, colleagues and making new friends. To conclude,
besides
the demerits, I opine that changing one or two careers is beneficial for employees’ growth by making them
multitalented
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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