People have different job expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently. Write about the advantages and disadvantages of each viewpoint

Nowadays, some people believe that changing
job
time to time helps an employee to get more experience and a better
job
, while others disagree with
this
opinion and argue that it will destroy their reputation as an employee.
This
essay disagrees with
this
viewpoint altering a
job
helps an individual in becoming a successful person.
One
group of advocates reckons that people
do not have stuck
Suggestion
don't stick
do not stick
to a
job
for
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in
their
job
whole life because they think in
this
way they learn more and find a suitable
job
at the end. To illustrate
this
, a recent study conducted by World Economics Forums results that when a worker works at various places and companies rather doing a single
job
, that enhances
one
to understand that people in their work life is easier.
However
, I disagree with
this
viewpoint because
this
attitude does not work everywhere. On the other side, who consider doing
one
job
in
one
company
is a principal way of generating more positives presents an argument that in
this
way they understand each and every problem of their
company
very nearly,
moreover
, they know how to fix it. From my point of view, they may get higher positions in their
company
as an honour by getting the trust of the
company
. In 2014, Cambridge Business School concluded that 90℅ of CEO's of tech tycoon companies
such
as Google hire those persons for their foremost positions who do not have any background altering
information profile
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information profiles
.
As a result
, they got more respect and money in the old age. To conclude, it is not a terminating idea to change a profession or
job
,
although
doing it regularly gives many deteriorating effects on
one
's resume and
one
get failed to get the honourable position
.
Accept space
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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