International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants ant the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

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Tourism

is a highly profitable business globally. People all over the world can travel to different places to experience other cultures and belief systems. The main advantage is the extra income for the governments and their people, whereas an increase in crime and destruction of facilities

are

Suggestion

the major drawbacks. In my opinion, the negative effects of international

tourism

are far greater than the positives. The main benefit of

tourism

is the generation of revenue that can be used to improve the quality of life and its citizens. The funds which can be gotten from entrance fees, taxes on hotel reservations and flight tickets as well as food items

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are used to maintain public facilities.

In addition

, the local people's businesses

also

thrive because of high

partronage

the act of providing approval and support

patronage

from tourists.

For example

, a statement issued by the Lagos State Government in 2017, showed that visits to the Nike Art gallery, a well-loved tourist attraction in Nigeria, accounted for about 60% of its revenue for the year.

On the other hand

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increased crime rates

remains

Suggestion

remain

a major problem of international

tourism

. Visiting visas are easy to get,

hence

, different people are given access into the accepting country.

Furthermore

, as there are no background checks for visitors, anyone with the

neccessary

absolutely essential

necessary

requirements can travel. The majority of travellers carry with them valuable items which attract potential

thiefs

a criminal who takes property belonging to someone else with the intention of keeping it or selling it

thieves

thief

, even among the locals.

For instance

, a survey carried out by the police department in Paris, in 2015, revealed there was a twenty percent rise in crime rates since the opening of its world-

renowed

widely known and esteemed

renowned

water park in 2013.

Secondly

, locations known as

favorite

something regarded with special favor or liking

favourite

holiday destinations suffer from

infrastructural

damage and littering of the surroundings. The high influx of people into

such

areas, exert a burden on the facilities there,

such

as hospitals, transport systems and superstores.

In addition

, there is a reduction in effective maintenance as the state would not want to shut down operations because of the money they stand to gain. In conclusion, despite international

tourism

being a heavy generator of revenue for the government, the

negatives

Suggestion

negative

impact it puts on the security of lives and property which is a duty of the government is far much more than what the government generates

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International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants ant the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

Include an introduction and conclusion

in many countries, number of older people are increase. some people says that this will cause more problems to that countries. others say that older people can play a role in society. discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?

Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?