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You eat at your favorite restaurant every day for lunch. You do not like the decor they have chosen. Write the manager a letter telling him: • What you think is great about the restaurant? • What things you think need to be changed? • Suggestions on ways to improve the decor?

#restaurant #lunch #decor #manager #suggestions
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with recent indoor decoration work done at your
restaurant
. As I am
regular customer
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a regular customer
 of
this
restaurant
 I feel an urge to let you know what I feel about the
restaurant
. There are many things that I really admire about the resultant: It is spacious and
staff
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the staff
 is really friendly. Beside
this
 the cuisine
are
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is
 really
savory
morally wholesome or acceptable
savoury
 and delicious. I have been a regular customer of your
restaurant
 for around two years. I
also
 feel very comfortable to hold my celebration parties like birthday in your
restaurant
.
However
, there are some recent changes done at your
restaurant
 that I really don’t like. These are the new blue light installed indoor and walls are painted dark grey.
Firstly
, both former combinations
make
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makes
 the feeling as you are sitting in the club, but not in a
restaurant
.
Secondly
, one cannot see the original
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
 of food served in blue lights which hinders to eat comfortably. Here are some suggestions that might improve the situation. Blue lights should be replaced by standard white
light preferable
Accept comma addition
light, preferable
 energy
savors
someone who saves something from danger or violence
savers
, which will make
environment
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the environment
an environment
 like sitting at home.
In addition
, walls should be painted light blue or white which will enhance the decorum of resultant. Thank you for taking time to read
this
 letter and I hope to
listen
perceive (sound) via the auditory sense
hear
 from you soon. Yours sincerely, Ali
Submitted by ALI on

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