Science will soon make people live up to 100 years or even 200 years. Some believe this is a good thing while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Aging in recent years has become very debatable. Many individuals share the view that new scientific innovations will enable humans

live

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to live

up to about 100 to 200 years on earth, making

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beneficial because,

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will enable them live longer with their family members,

however

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, I strongly disagree with

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view

because,

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, because this would

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would not only increase the world’ population but

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increase environmental pollution.

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essay will discuss both views

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length. The major reason why individuals share the opinion that living more years on earth is beneficial is because,

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allows longer time with

ones

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one

one's

family.

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, the longer humans stay in the world the closer they are to their families. Imagine if you will,

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present generation living for more than 10 decades, knowing more than 4 to 5 generations, becoming great great grandparents.

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, resulting in a community of extended families.

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, many believe that

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is unrealistic mainly because,

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would increase population, which in turn increases environmental pollution.

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implies that, more citizens will be subjected to the effects of overcrowding

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such as, spread

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, such as spread

of airborne diseases. Take

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, the spread of tuberculosis in 1940, in South America, which took about 300,000 lives. According to Dr Shama Atake, the historian, the spread of

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disease was

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of overcrowding.

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, innovations to increase life cycle would result in severe environmental damage. In conclusion, scientific developments

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would, rather

than, benefit the community, cause more damage to not only the

society but

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society, but

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the health of the citizens within the society.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

262 words

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Science will soon make people live up to 100 years or even 200 years. Some believe this is a good thing while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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