Science will soon make people live up to 100 years or even 200 years. Some believe this is a good thing while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Aging in recent years has become very debatable. Many individuals share the view that new scientific innovations will enable humans

live

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to live

up to about 100 to 200 years on earth, making

this

beneficial because,

this

will enable them live longer with their family members,

however

, I strongly disagree with

this

view

because,

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, because this would

this

would not only increase the world’ population but

also

increase environmental pollution.

This

essay will discuss both views

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length. The major reason why individuals share the opinion that living more years on earth is beneficial is because,

this

allows longer time with

ones

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one

one's

family.

In other words

, the longer humans stay in the world the closer they are to their families. Imagine if you will,

this

present generation living for more than 10 decades, knowing more than 4 to 5 generations, becoming great great grandparents.

Thus

, resulting in a community of extended families.

On the contrary

, many believe that

this

is unrealistic mainly because,

this

would increase population, which in turn increases environmental pollution.

This

implies that, more citizens will be subjected to the effects of overcrowding

such as, spread

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, such as spread

of airborne diseases. Take

for example

, the spread of tuberculosis in 1940, in South America, which took about 300,000 lives. According to Dr Shama Atake, the historian, the spread of

this

disease was

as a result

of overcrowding.

Hence

, innovations to increase life cycle would result in severe environmental damage. In conclusion, scientific developments

would rather

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would, rather

than, benefit the community, cause more damage to not only the

society but

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society, but

also

the health of the citizens within the society.

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Prediction or recommendation

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In a nutshell
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10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

262 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Science will soon make people live up to 100 years or even 200 years. Some believe this is a good thing while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

You recently stayed at your friend's place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: describe what the accident was explain when it happened suggest how the damage can be fixed.

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