Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is very known that

nowaday

the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech

nowadays

people

have suffering

Suggestion

are suffering

with

inumerous

amounting to a large indefinite number

numerous

numbers of health

diseiss

an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning

diseases

. Many of

this

plural of "this"

these

those

problems have been caused for the poor

live

Suggestion

life

style,

such

as intake foods without

good level

Suggestion

a good level

of nutritive rate, and a

live

Suggestion

life

without

fisical

involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit

physical

exercice

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

exercise

. Many

says

Suggestion

say

that the

govenament

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

systems

shuld

disposed of to a purchaser

sold

to provide

good

Suggestion

better

condictions

the prevailing context that influences the performance or the outcome of a process

conditions

conduction

of diet, in

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

hand others

seems

Suggestion

seem

to do not care about their own

helth

a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease

health

, and try to relive all their sadness into good foods with lots of sugar. The questions that we

should to make

Suggestion

should make

are; Do we

realy

in accordance with truth or fact or reality

really

need someone

sayind

a word or phrase that particular people use in particular situations

saying

saint

for

Suggestion

us what to eat? Are we already been

controled

restrained or managed or kept within certain bounds

controlled

enouth

as much as necessary

enough

? In my

poit

a geometric element that has position but no extension

point

of view, each person should to have the free

choise

the person or thing chosen or selected

choice

chose

choose

to do what they want with

theirs

of them or themselves

their

lives. If they do not care for the long term, and what just to leave the present without care

to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits

too

much for the future, may they will pay a rough price,

such

as some kind of sickness or something like that.

Contrary

Suggestion

The contrary

of that,

have

in what way or manner or by what means

how

many of

people

Suggestion

the people

that now the big importance that the good

helth

a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease

health

give

for

Suggestion

us, and a chance to enjoy a

wanderfull

extraordinarily good or great; used especially as an intensifier

wonderful

elder live,

been

the state or fact of existing

being

able to see and participate of the

live

Suggestion

life

liver

livers

of the

grandchield

a child of your son or daughter

grandchild

for

exemplo

an item of information that is typical of a class or group

example

. The governments could and should to help, but in a way to introduce

knowled

and information for people, and not

denyind

declare untrue; contradict

denying

theier

of them or themselves

their

free choice.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
41Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

235 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

health-conscious decisions
self-discipline
informed choices
personal accountability
regulating food industries
implementing policies
healthy eating
public health campaigns
subsidies for healthy food
enabling environment
accessible
affordable

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Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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