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Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #responsibility #individuals #care #health #diet #governments #citizens
It is very known that
nowaday
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
 people
have suffering
Suggestion
are suffering
 with
inumerous
amounting to a large indefinite number
numerous
 numbers of health
diseiss
an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
diseases
. Many of
this
plural of "this"
these
those
 problems have been caused for the poor
live
Suggestion
life
 style,
such
 as intake foods without
good level
Suggestion
a good level
 of nutritive rate, and a
live
Suggestion
life
 without
fisical
involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
exercice
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
. Many
says
Suggestion
say
 that the
govenament
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
 systems
shuld
disposed of to a purchaser
sold
 to provide
good
Suggestion
better
condictions
the prevailing context that influences the performance or the outcome of a process
conditions
conduction
 of diet, in
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 hand others
seems
Suggestion
seem
 to do not care about their own
helth
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
, and try to relive all their sadness into good foods with lots of sugar. The questions that we
should to make
Suggestion
should make
 are; Do we
realy
in accordance with truth or fact or reality
really
 need someone
sayind
a word or phrase that particular people use in particular situations
saying
saint
for
Suggestion
to
 us what to eat? Are we already been
controled
restrained or managed or kept within certain bounds
controlled
enouth
as much as necessary
enough
? In my
poit
a geometric element that has position but no extension
point
 of view, each person should to have the free
choise
the person or thing chosen or selected
choice
chose
choose
 to do what they want with
theirs
of them or themselves
their
 lives. If they do not care for the long term, and what just to leave the present without care
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
 much for the future, may they will pay a rough price,
such
 as some kind of sickness or something like that.
Contrary
Suggestion
The contrary
 of that,
have
in what way or manner or by what means
how
 many of
people
Suggestion
the people
 that now the big importance that the good
helth
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
 give
for
Suggestion
to
 us, and a chance to enjoy a
wanderfull
extraordinarily good or great; used especially as an intensifier
wonderful
 elder live,
been
the state or fact of existing
being
 able to see and participate of the
live
Suggestion
life
liver
livers
 of the
grandchield
a child of your son or daughter
grandchild
 for
exemplo
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
. The governments could and should to help, but in a way to introduce
knowled
 and information for people, and not
denyind
declare untrue; contradict
denying
theier
of them or themselves
their
 free choice.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health-conscious decisions
  • self-discipline
  • informed choices
  • personal accountability
  • regulating food industries
  • implementing policies
  • healthy eating
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies for healthy food
  • enabling environment
  • accessible
  • affordable
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