Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Over the past two decades, motorways or highways have become the most useful transportation method over the world and no country is an exception to it. Governments are spending billions of money to develop new motorways.

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, it is a known fact that

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trend comes with some cons attached to it. In

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essay, I will discuss about drawbacks with

expressway

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expressways

an expressway

and will try to come up with

few possible solutions

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a few possible solutions

. I could not agree to the fact that,

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propel through the air

throws

are easy access to hassle free travel without much traffic on the roads. Because of no traffic, there is a possibility that drivers can hit

maximum speed

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a maximum speed

maximum speeds

of their vehicles.

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, they might

loss

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

lose

the control over the car or truck and their lives could be at

stack

put at risk

stake

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should be avoided in order to provide safety of the travels. One of my friends drove his vehicle at 140KM/

hour though

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hour, though

the speed limit was only 100KM/hour. Though there was not any incident has happened, his driving license was forbidden by the high patrol officer. In many countries, there will not be rest stops on highways. Due to

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travelers

a person who changes location

travellers

are forced to drive too

much of distance

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much distance

at a stretch.

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has been one of the main reasons for accidents on the

broadways

a road (especially that part of a road) over which vehicles travel

roadways

. Another drawback, which comes with expressway is, environmental

affects

property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business

effects

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, in order to concentrate new highways governments are opting for deforestation

as a result

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wild life

all living things (except people) that are undomesticated

wildlife

, flora and fauna affected largely. To overcome all

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this issues

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this issue

these issues

, certain mechanisms should in place and bureaucrats have to come up with sophisticated guidelines.

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, they should install speed guns on

broadways

a street in Manhattan that passes through Times Square; famous for its theaters

Broadways

roadways

broadways'

for every 100 miles and should impose high price tickets who ever crossed the speed limits.

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, will have to consider installing rest stops or refreshment areas or play station.

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, the drives can take breaks every now and

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a journey.

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, will have to build the

thruways

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freeways

thrives

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a way that it will not impact the environment. Briefly, expressways can be easy access to cover long

distance but

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distance, but

are dangerous in few ways too. In my opinion, there is a possibility to overcome the entire drawback it can bring and we can make highways as a safe and secure transportation method.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

380 words

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some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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