Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Over the past two decades, motorways or highways have become the most useful transportation method over the world and no country is an exception to it. Governments are spending billions of money to develop new motorways.
However
, it is a known fact that
this
trend comes with some cons attached to it. In
this
essay, I will discuss about drawbacks with
expressway
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expressways
an expressway
and will try to come up with
few possible solutions
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a few possible solutions
. I could not agree to the fact that,
thruways
propel through the air
throws
are easy access to hassle free travel without much traffic on the roads. Because of no traffic, there is a possibility that drivers can hit
maximum speed
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a maximum speed
maximum speeds
of their vehicles.
As a result
, they might
loss
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
the control over the car or truck and their lives could be at
stack
put at risk
stake
.
This
should be avoided in order to provide safety of the travels. One of my friends drove his vehicle at 140KM/
hour though
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hour, though
the speed limit was only 100KM/hour. Though there was not any incident has happened, his driving license was forbidden by the high patrol officer. In many countries, there will not be rest stops on highways. Due to
this
,
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
are forced to drive too
much of distance
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much distance
at a stretch.
This
has been one of the main reasons for accidents on the
broadways
a road (especially that part of a road) over which vehicles travel
roadways
. Another drawback, which comes with expressway is, environmental
affects
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
.
That is
, in order to concentrate new highways governments are opting for deforestation
as a result
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
, flora and fauna affected largely. To overcome all
this issues
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this issue
these issues
, certain mechanisms should in place and bureaucrats have to come up with sophisticated guidelines.
First
, they should install speed guns on
broadways
a street in Manhattan that passes through Times Square; famous for its theaters
Broadways
roadways
broadways'
for every 100 miles and should impose high price tickets who ever crossed the speed limits.
Second
, will have to consider installing rest stops or refreshment areas or play station.
Therefore
, the drives can take breaks every now and
then
in
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on
a journey.
Third
, will have to build the
thruways
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freeways
thrives
in
such
a way that it will not impact the environment. Briefly, expressways can be easy access to cover long
distance but
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distance, but
are dangerous in few ways too. In my opinion, there is a possibility to overcome the entire drawback it can bring and we can make highways as a safe and secure transportation method.
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