People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.

Nowadays, people in all communities take drugs to A certain extent,
however
younger groups are practicing intake of drugs either legally or illegally. It is claimed by sociologists that their closest family members and others surrounding them play a role in their interest for unhealthy substances and affect children in a wrong way.
This
essay will discuss some possible causes that create side effects and
secondly
, suggest some actions that are necessary to be taken to prevent youths from abusing
drug
Suggestion
drugs
. Directors and tutors at school do not warn children about disadvantages of drugs that children are very curious at their teens and likely to try any form of
drug
without being aware of its possible dangers. Another reason why illegal
drugS
a substance that is used as a medicine or narcotic
drugs
drug
is used
Suggestion
are used
widely is that those children have easy access to it. According to the local police report in 2017, THE majority of illegal
drug
users claimed that they had the idea of using when they were teenagers. In order to stop misuse of
drug
, schools should give a knowledge about
bad consequences
Suggestion
the bad consequences
of taking
harmful substance
Suggestion
a harmful substance
such
as marijuana and
also
illegal
drug
dealers should be IMPRISONED. That way, youths will be more aware and prevent both themselves and their friends from BECOMING
addictED
compulsively or physiologically dependent on something habit-forming
addicted
to dangerous medicine. In my country,
for instance
, primary schools organize a special day for fighting
drug
misuse every year in cooperation with police officers and
this
helped to decrease
drug
-related crimes significantly
last
year. In conclusion, lack of preventive action by educators and the fact that illegal
drugS
a substance that is used as a medicine or narcotic
drugs
ARE sold easily by dealers are causing many people at
young age
Suggestion
a young age
to become
addictED
compulsively or physiologically dependent on something habit-forming
addicted
to
drugS
a substance that is used as a medicine or narcotic
drugs
drug
and the best suggestions to
this
problem would be giving knowledge about adverse results of misusing
drugS
a substance that is used as a medicine or narcotic
drugs
and cutting DOWN ON ILLEGAL
saleS
income (at invoice values) received for goods and services over some given period of time
sales
sale S
seals
sails
.
of
Suggestion
Of
it.
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