The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making progress, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram shows the steps and tools used during the process of making
cement
, and how concrete for buildings is produced from Use synonyms
this
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cement
. Use synonyms
Cement
is made by mixing and processing several Use synonyms
ingredient
together and the Change to a plural noun
ingredients
cement
is Use synonyms
then
mixed with another set of ingredients to make concrete.
First, Linking Words
cement
production beings with limestone and clay being crushed into powder and Use synonyms
then
mixed together in a mixer. Linking Words
Next
, the mixed powder is heated in a special rotating heater and Linking Words
then
ground into Linking Words
Use synonyms
cement
before being put into bags.
To make concrete from Add an article
the cement
cement
, the first thing you need to do is combine the Use synonyms
cement
with water, sand, and gravel. The mixture is not equal, with sand and gravel making up Use synonyms
three quarters
of the mixture and Add a hyphen
three-quarters
cement
and water accounting for the remaining Use synonyms
one quarter
. Add a hyphen
one-quarter
This
combination is mixed together in a special rotating container called a concrete mixer to produce concrete.Linking Words
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