The tourism industry has grown enormously over the last fifty years, and there a few places which are unaffected by it. However, tourism rarely benefits the countries which tourists visit. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In most countries,

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industry has been a very important sector of the

country

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due to the growth of

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. In my opinion,

tourism

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has some major drawbacks.

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, like any major industry,

tourism

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could be beneficial for the

country

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. It is an undeniable fact that

tourism

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could significantly increase the population of the

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. That means, there will be

higher possibility

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a higher possibility

of air pollution to happen due to the use of cars or motorbikes especially in tourist attractions.

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, Thailand has become a famous tourist

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and air pollution is extremely common in the city

center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

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because the main transportation of the

country

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is driving a car.

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, the

rise

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of

tourism

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could highly affect the health of the people in the

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. Another disadvantage of

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in a

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would be

culture

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disappearance.

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, the locals are able to exchange their knowledge of their

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and language with tourists, disappearance of the local

culture

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might happen.

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, tourists may bring in their home

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to the

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which affects the local traditions or

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.

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, Balinese tradition has not been

practicing

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practiced

by the locals, which means that it is slowly disappearing due to the overwhelming of tourists in the

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.

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, there is a major benefit

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of

having tourists in a

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.

Employment

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The employment rate

rate

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of the

country

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could increase due to

rise

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of demand

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for

goods and services by the tourists. It means, there will be more jobs available for the locals, which improves the overall economy.

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, China has one of the fastest growing economy in the world due to the

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of

employment

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the employment rate

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. In conclusion, I personally think there are significant drawbacks and

benefit

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a benefit

benefits

for the

country

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which has

high

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a high tourism rate

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rate

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. Air pollution could be easily avoided by encouraging tourists to use the public transport and the local

culture

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should be often practiced by the locals.

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,

rise

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of employment

rate

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could improve the standard of living

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in

the

country

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.