The tourism industry has grown enormously over the last fifty years, and there a few places which are unaffected by it. However, tourism rarely benefits the countries which tourists visit. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In most countries,

tourism

industry has been a very important sector of the

country

due to the growth of

tourism

. In my opinion,

tourism

has some major drawbacks.

However

, like any major industry,

tourism

could be beneficial for the

country

. It is an undeniable fact that

tourism

could significantly increase the population of the

country

. That means, there will be

higher possibility

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a higher possibility

of air pollution to happen due to the use of cars or motorbikes especially in tourist attractions.

For instance

, Thailand has become a famous tourist

country

and air pollution is extremely common in the city

center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

country

because the main transportation of the

country

is driving a car.

Therefore

, the

rise

of

tourism

could highly affect the health of the people in the

country

. Another disadvantage of

tourism

in a

country

would be

culture

disappearance.

Although

, the locals are able to exchange their knowledge of their

culture

and language with tourists, disappearance of the local

culture

might happen.

In other words

, tourists may bring in their home

culture

to the

country

which affects the local traditions or

culture

.

For example

, Balinese tradition has not been

practicing

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practiced

by the locals, which means that it is slowly disappearing due to the overwhelming of tourists in the

country

.

However

, there is a major benefit

for

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of

having tourists in a

country

.

Employment

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The employment rate

rate

of the

country

could increase due to

rise

of demand

of

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for

goods and services by the tourists. It means, there will be more jobs available for the locals, which improves the overall economy.

For example

, China has one of the fastest growing economy in the world due to the

rise

of

employment

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the employment rate

rate

. In conclusion, I personally think there are significant drawbacks and

benefit

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a benefit

benefits

for the

country

which has

high

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a high tourism rate

tourism

rate

. Air pollution could be easily avoided by encouraging tourists to use the public transport and the local

culture

should be often practiced by the locals.

Also

,

rise

of employment

rate

could improve the standard of living

of

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in

the

country

.