Some people believe bicycle has lot of advantages whereas others believe bicycle has more disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, bicycles market trends as increased in terms of cost and usage. Some sections of people feel that
bicycle
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the bicycle
has more advantages and
on the other hand
, some think it has more disadvantages.
This
essay will discuss why
bicycle
has drawbacks and provide my opinion that
bicycle
benefits outweigh the drawbacks. The prime disadvantage of bicycles is that it cannot be used as a
fast
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faster
mode of transport. In our daily life we stay at a place which is some miles away from our work. Ultimately, we cannot rely on a
bicycle
for reaching out to daily office work. If we go by
bicycle
there is a more probability that we may miss our deadlines.
As a result
, people prefer
faster mode
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a faster mode
of transports like public buses, trains or their own bike, car.
However
,
bicycle
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the bicycle
has the potential to increase our health benefits. So bicycles can be used for our weekly purposes like bringing vegetables from market, groceries from departmental stores. As a consequence, we exercise our body and people's fitness levels increases. A study conducted by Cambridge University between two groups of families who use
bicycle
versus
motor bikes
small motorcycle with a low frame and small wheels and elevated handlebars
motorbikes
stated that the families who used
bicycle
were ten percent healthier than
families
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the families
who used motorbikes.
As a result
,
bicycle
increases people’s health.
Secondly
, it is non-hazardous to
environment
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the environment
. As bicycles
doesn't emit
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don't emit
any harmful gases like other vehicles does by using fuel or gas it is more nature friendly. A survey published by New York Times in the region of Thailand showed that by using bicycles in the years between 2015-2018 reduced air pollution and increased the percentage of healthy air quality by two percent. In conclusion,
this
essay discussed both
disadvantage
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disadvantages
and advantages of
bicycle
and
also
provided my
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provided, my
opinion that
advantages
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the advantages
outweigh the disadvantages.
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