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many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think advantage of charging people for admission to museum outweigh the disadvantages?

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Museums allow people to know about their Heritage and culture. In some galleries, you need to pay
certain
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a certain amount
amount
 of
money
 while some are
unchargeable
not changeable or subject to change
unchangeable
. In my opinion, I believe that paying for the
entry
 in
museum
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the museum
 is
lot
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a lot
 more beneficial than that of unpaid admission and the benefit of it
obviously overcome
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obviously overcomes
 its drawback. Admittedly, there
are
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is
 some disadvantage of
charged
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charge
entry
.
Firstly
, it hinders poor people
to know
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know
 about the history of their nation and not provide equal reach to all.
For instance
, families who are not even being able to arrange
money
 for food are unable to pay
certain
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a certain amount
amount
 of cost for
entry
.
Secondly
, in some countries
amount
 of admission are not same for all, foreigners have to pay huge
amount
 of
money
, which deter the tourism at large extent.
Nevertheless
, despite of
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
above I
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above, I
 believe paid
entry
in
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into
museum
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the museum
 is must for all because people respect for what they pay.
Also they
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Also, they
 are having huge maintenance cost and to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
this
, authorities need
money
.
Moreover
, managing committees of these galleries have to pay taxes to the
government which
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government, which
also
 cover the need of other sectors.
Consequently
, it hinders unwanted mob to come around and permit interested ones to view properly, as there is
absence
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an absence
 of unwanted people who could always affect the cleanliness of
museum
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the museum
. In conclusion, imposing
fee
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fees
 to show historical things are far more beneficial than its obstacle. It helps higher management to maintain it throughout and keep it garbage free.
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