The main reason why people work is money. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

I completely agree that the need of
money
is the one which forces most people to engage in any form of employment. Today's life is associated with financial expenditures, without
money
, it
maybe
Suggestion
may be
difficult or even impossible to live, owing to that people are encouraged to seek employment. People need food, water, accomodation and clothes to live.
This
have
Suggestion
has
to be bought, and
now unlike
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now, unlike
the old good days people prefer
money
in exchange of goods and services than barter trade. Owing to the above one has to work so as to earn the
money
then
inturn
Suggestion
in turn
pay for the day to day cost of living.
Secondly
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
have observed that if a company is having low rates of salaries, mostly people are not willing to join
such
companies.
Furthermore
, if they are
salaru
receiving a salary
salaried
solar
conflicts like low wages or
pau
give money, usually in exchange for goods or services
pay
increase the workers usually start a strike or go slow.
This
is a clear
demostration
a show or display; the act of presenting something to sight or view
demonstration
that people are working for
money
and nothing else. In conclusion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
totally agree that
money
is the only reason why people are working.
This
has been due to the fact that it is only
money which
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money, which
is widely accepted during trade in most countries.
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