Everyone one have to learn English. Do you agree. Is it important to protect local languages and if yes how.

English is now being used by many countries and has been introduced as a lesson in many schools. Owing to
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think it is crucial for every school child to learn
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feel our local languages have to be protected so that they are not suppressed by English language. Personally,
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feel the importance of English as a language is increasing drastically,
every child has to be given the opportunity to learn it. My argument is based on the fact that, the world has taken a new twist and use of technology is now more prominent than ever before. New gadgets like smart phones and computers has been invented because of
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
Today almost
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Today, almost
everyone owns either a phone or a computer if not both. In most
cases these
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cases, these
gadgets are being used to surf data on the internet or to communicate with friends through social media
just to mention a few. To be able to use either internet or social media a command in English is essential Due to that it will be beneficial for everyone to be able
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communicate in English. In conclusion, my own feeling is it a worthwhile action for English to be learnt by all of us even though
must not cause the extinction of our mother languages.
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