The greater proportion of government's budget should be allocated to disease prevention and health education because prevention is better than cure. Do you agree or disagree?

Disease prevention is better than cure. Some may ask
,
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,
Why?
This
is simply because it is cheaper to prevent a disease than to treat it.
Moreover
, it reduces cases of complications. Owing to the above,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am completely convinced that it is better to spend a larger proportion of the state's budget on preventive measures rather than on
treatment
modalities.
Firstly
, it is
cheap
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cheaper
to prevent an illness than to treat. The reason being, no one would be pretty sure of how the disease is going to progress.
For example
, some diseases may easily complicate
such
as bacterial meningitis. Any delay to seek
treatment
may result into complications which are expensive to manage.
Therefore
, it is cheaper to avoid new cases than to treat it
Furthermore
, some diseases can easily spread within a community causing outbreaks, which will
then
cost large some of money to control. One clear example is cholera. Cholera can easily spread within hours and
it
it is
it's
very expensive to control the outbreaks.
Secondly
, some diseases are difficult to cure due to several reasons
such
as, drug
resistance thereby
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resistance, thereby
causing some complications
such
as disability or even death. In
such
cases it is much better to prevent the diseases rather than to witness cases of death or
disablity
the condition of being unable to perform as a consequence of physical or mental unfitness
disability
due to preventable disease.
For example
, it is better
to
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for
health educate people on how to prevent poliomyelitis than to have cases of disability due to poliomyelitis. Due to that,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
concur it is better to spend more on preventive measures than on
treatment
. In conclusion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
totally agree that it is better for the country to spend more on health education and
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an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
disease
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in place of, or as an alternative to
instead
of spending on
treatment
.
This
is because it reduces cases of complications. Above all, it is cheap.
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