Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Environment
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Environmental
pollution has been affecting our planet in the recent decade. Many governments have recently decided to increase the cost of fuel in order to resolve
this
issue. I strongly feel that
this
decision is not the only solution to the problem and we will need to approach in
differnt light
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a different light
different light
.
First
and foremost, increasing petrol prices will definitely force people to use their vehicles less and in turn could to a certain degree reverse the damaging effects to the planet in terms of carbon dioxide
emitions
the act of emitting; causing to flow forth
emissions
emission
.
However
the question we must ask ourselves is can
reducing
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reduce
prices alone help
wolve
find the solution to (a problem or question) or understand the meaning of
solve
weave
our environment?
Unfortuntately not
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Unfortunately, not
Unfortunately not
completely,
also
they affect the prices of basic commodities which could impact the lives of poor and middle class families.
On the other hand
, governments can take measures to curb the pollution by encouraging the use of renewable energy. They could incentivise the purchase of electric vehicles that could reduce the
consumtion
the process of taking food into the body through the mouth (as by eating)
consumption
of coal and other fossil fuels.
For example
, Norway has made it mandatory to become Fossil fuel free by 2020 and they have drawn out plans for the same.
Secondly by
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Secondly, by
using public transport we
have reduce
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have reduced
the carbon-print.
This
would most likely have a tremendous impact on the environment and reduce traffic overall. In conclusion, I strongly believe that only increasing the cost of fuel is not the best solution to
this
problem. By encouraging renewable alternatives to our coal
fueled
fail to do something; leave something undone
failed
economy and improving public transportation would
definetly
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
bring the needed effect on our planet.
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