Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

The
use
of processed or
preparaped
made ready or fit or suitable beforehand
prepared
meals or
agricultual
relating to or used in or promoting agriculture or farming
agricultural
products have increased in recent years thank to the advances in the
food
processing
technology which
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technology, which
consiquently
(sentence connectors) because of the reason given
consequently
has a great
impact
on our daily
life
. These
influces
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influences
are mainly positive as ready foods
enhances
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enhance
the quality of
life
,
althoug
even though, in spite of the fact that
although
some cautions might need to be considered when evaluation of these
impact
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impacts
. Perhaps, the most obvious
impact
preparing
food
easily is more
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is more easily
and more foods available and ready to
use
.
As a result
, it
make
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makes
easier for getting the meals,
therefore
, people have more time for other works. As we are getting busier and have a little time to prepare our meals, the processed foods can help us to avoid some boring steps as cutting or
cleanning
the act of making something clean
cleaning
vegetables or meats which makes cooking more enjoyable.
For instance
,
in stead
in place of, or as an alternative to
instead
of spending 20 minutes to cut, clean and add
seasons
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seasoning
for the pork
ribbs
support resembling the rib of an animal
ribs
, some can buy a ready to
use
bbq
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BBQ
rib package with almost the same quality.
Addtionally
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Additionally
,
some time
at some indefinite or unstated time
sometime
the
prapared
made ready or fit or suitable beforehand
prepared
foods
also
cheaper and
easily
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easy
to deliver.
Besides
, advanced
food
prepared
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preparation
technology
also improve
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also improves
has also improved
the
food
safety which
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safety, which
is
also
the major issues for many countries. By better labelling products, the
authories
writes (books or stories or articles or the like) professionally (for pay)
authors
authorities
could find out the origin of the products in case of having some
proplems
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
with
food
posions
something determined in relation to something that includes it
portions
passions
poisons
. Importantly, as the
food
trade
among
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between
the countries or
contients
one of the large landmasses of the earth
continents
contents
increases significantly, the processed
food
help to trace back cause of disease in some cases, so it
help
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helps
to improve the national
food
security and stable the citizen
life
. On
another hand
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the other hand
other hand
, the potential
impact
this
change
on
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in
our
life
might due to an overuse of processed foods which often contains some chemicals. As
consequence
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a consequence
, some diseases
such
as cancers or gut diseases have been reported as people rely on ready to processed
food
containning
include or contain; have as a component
containing
higher amount of
consevative
resistant to change
conservative
consecutive
chemicals.
Also
, obesity disease has been
increased
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increasing
at an alarming rate due to
eatting
the act of consuming food
eating
too much prepared foods with higher amount of sugar and far.
Therefore
, it could
also
important to be
avoid
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avoiding
use
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using
too much processed
foods
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food
. In conclusion, changes in the processing
food
seems
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seem
to improve our
life
quality by reducing the
food
prices and enhancing the
food
security if the ready meals are used in the control level.
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