Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

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The

use

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of processed or

preparaped

made ready or fit or suitable beforehand

prepared

meals or

agricultual

relating to or used in or promoting agriculture or farming

agricultural

products have increased in recent years thank to the advances in the

food

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processing

technology which

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technology, which

consiquently

(sentence connectors) because of the reason given

consequently

has a great

impact

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on our daily

life

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. These

influces

a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc

influences

are mainly positive as ready foods

enhances

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enhance

the quality of

life

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althoug

even though, in spite of the fact that

although

some cautions might need to be considered when evaluation of these

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impact

Suggestion

impacts

. Perhaps, the most obvious

impact

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preparing

food

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easily is more

Suggestion

is more easily

and more foods available and ready to

use

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As a result

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, it

make

Suggestion

makes

easier for getting the meals,

therefore

Linking Words

, people have more time for other works. As we are getting busier and have a little time to prepare our meals, the processed foods can help us to avoid some boring steps as cutting or

cleanning

the act of making something clean

cleaning

vegetables or meats which makes cooking more enjoyable.

For instance

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in stead

in place of, or as an alternative to

instead

of spending 20 minutes to cut, clean and add

seasons

Suggestion

seasoning

for the pork

ribbs

support resembling the rib of an animal

ribs

, some can buy a ready to

use

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bbq

Suggestion

BBQ

rib package with almost the same quality.

Addtionally

Suggestion

Additionally

some time

at some indefinite or unstated time

sometime

the

prapared

made ready or fit or suitable beforehand

prepared

foods

also

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cheaper and

easily

Suggestion

easy

to deliver.

Besides

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, advanced

food

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prepared

Suggestion

preparation

technology

Linking Words

also improve

Suggestion

also improves

has also improved

the

food

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safety which

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safety, which

also

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the major issues for many countries. By better labelling products, the

authories

writes (books or stories or articles or the like) professionally (for pay)

authors

authorities

could find out the origin of the products in case of having some

proplems

a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved

problems

with

food

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posions

something determined in relation to something that includes it

portions

passions

poisons

. Importantly, as the

food

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trade

among

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between

the countries or

contients

one of the large landmasses of the earth

continents

contents

increases significantly, the processed

food

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help to trace back cause of disease in some cases, so it

help

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helps

to improve the national

food

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security and stable the citizen

life

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. On

another hand

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the other hand

other hand

, the potential

impact

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this

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change

Suggestion

our

life

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might due to an overuse of processed foods which often contains some chemicals. As

consequence

Suggestion

a consequence

, some diseases

such

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as cancers or gut diseases have been reported as people rely on ready to processed

food

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containning

include or contain; have as a component

containing

higher amount of

consevative

resistant to change

conservative

consecutive

chemicals.

Also

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, obesity disease has been

increased

Suggestion

increasing

at an alarming rate due to

eatting

the act of consuming food

eating

too much prepared foods with higher amount of sugar and far.

Therefore

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, it could

also

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important to be

avoid

Suggestion

avoiding

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use

Suggestion

using

too much processed

foods

Suggestion

food

. In conclusion, changes in the processing

food

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seems

Suggestion

seem

to improve our

life

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quality by reducing the

food

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prices and enhancing the

food

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security if the ready meals are used in the control level.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

380 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Modern appliances
Pre-packaged meals
Cooking time
Nutritional value
Public health
Work-life balance
Cultural heritage
Food industry
Processed foods
Packaging waste
Social bonding
Culinary skills
International cuisine
Preservatives
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Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

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Some people say that all people should stay in full-time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.