Some people think that the best way to reduce crimes is to apply longer prison sentences, other people think that there are better methods of doing so. Discuss both views.

Nowadays, people are

facing

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faced

with many dangers, one of them is criminal

such

as violent crime,

pick-pocket

a thief who steals from the pockets or purses of others in public places

pickpocket

pickpockets

and

kidnapper

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the kidnapper

. In order to cut down on the number of crimes, many people suppose that we should lengthen the prison sentences, whereas others believe that there are more effective solutions. On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why doing other things is more practical to reduce criminals.

Firstly

, some prisoners

keep

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keeps

doing bad things after being set free and they could be sent back to the prison or they could do anything to run away before being caught again.

This

might threaten peoples’ safety.

Secondly

, some people who have an extremely poor and live in very reduced circumstances, they have to become bad people and commit a crime, indeed they do not want to.

Therefore

, we could have other solutions,

for example

, we should educate people well since they are at school as they could have either enough knowledge or good health to improve their lives.

Additionally

, we must teach children what they must do to become good people and especially what they must not do, if they do

then

what they will be punished.

Moreover

, the job market now is very

competition so

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competitive, so

competitive so

competitively so

the unemployment rate is high,

government

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the government

should provide jobs for those who cannot find a job to make end meets.

Besides

, some people do not have a good physical health or they are not well-educated, so that they could not find a job, the government should provide them an amount of unemployment compensation. In result, all people could live on their own without

commit

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committing

to a crime.

On the other hand

, expanding sentences is beneficial in some ways.

Firstly

, when dangerous prisoners are kept in prison for a long time, life of normal people could be safe.

Secondly

, as long as the judgement arbitrate strictly, the citizens would be scared and avoid doing bad things. By way of conclusion, it seems evident that both lengthening sentences and carrying out other better solutions have their own advantages to reduce crimes.