Families who do not send their children to public schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It has been argued that people who sponsor their children in private schools, should be exempted from taxation meant to
support
public schools and universal basic
education
.
I
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In
my opinion, I strongly disagree with
this
view. Families whose children do not attend public
school
must continue to pay
tax
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taxes
.
This
is necessary to
support
government in catering for the less privileged and poorer families as we live in and operate a socialist economy. While
this
ensures fairness and equity, it
also
makes the society safe and secure for all.
For example
, if the poor was denied
education
because the rich did not
support
public
school
through tax because he was not subscribing to them, the sons of the poor who could not afford
education
could turn to hooligans and terrorise the communities.
Furthermore
, taxes should be paid by all citizens to
support
public
school
because it is more cost effective. In fact, it is clear that if the public schools are functioning optimally, everybody will want to attend
them including
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them, including
the rich because it is cheaper with more qualified teachers and other manpower.
Conversely private
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Conversely, private
schools are unnecessarily costly, employing cheap unqualified
labour
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labours
and extorting the communities. Public
school
needs just
little more
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a little more support
support
from sources,
such
as taxes to give its best for everyone.
For instance
, public schools are fully funded through taxation in Ghana, and they have high standard
such
that private schools do not thrive there at all. To conclude, no tax exemption or concession
on
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for
those whose children are not in public
school
in order to ensure basic
education
for all, standardize our government
school
and make a secure society.
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