The chart summarises the number of nurses in different department in Sunnyside Hospital
The bar chart provides information about the
number
of nurses
in subdivision
( Emergency, Theatre, Maternity and Cardiac Correct article usage
the subdivision
unit
) in Sunnyside Hospital between 2016 and 2018.
Overall
, it is evident that,
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maternity
department had almost the same Correct article usage
the maternity
number
of nurses
while
other units experience fluctuations within the period.
To begin
, Theatre had the highest number
is nurses
of about 60 in the year 2018 while
Cardiac
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the Cardiac
unit
recorded the least (30) in year
2016. Meanwhile, Change the article
the year
Emergency
and Cardiac Correct article usage
the Emergency
unit
had the same Fix the agreement mistake
units
number
of nurses
of
about 50 in the year 2016 and 2017 respectively.
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However
, while
other units experienced marked fluctuations, there was no significant difference between the nurses
that worked in Maternity
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the Maternity
unit
throughout the period. Whereas
, 2017 outnumbered other years by 2nurses.Submitted by remyte01 on
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