You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -Explain the important -Apologize for the situation -Suggest a new arrangement

Dear
john
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John

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, I hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and
to
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in

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the best of spirits. I know you must be very excited about my
visit
to your place but
unfortunately
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,unfortunately

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I have to postpone my plan due to some other important commitments.
This
morning, I received a letter from my NRI brother Harry that mentions that he is coming to
visit
home at the same
time
we planned to meet. As we had not seen him
from
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for

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long
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a long

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time
since his studies in
USA
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the USA

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, we all are very excited to meet him and spend some quality
time
together.
Also
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we had to
visit
some of our relatives and take a tour
to
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of

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nearby attractions and temples, so I would be really busy during those days. I really apologize for rescheduling my
visit
to your place because Harry had even booked the tickets and taken leaves from his office
otherwise
he could have changed his
visit
plan to India. He
do
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does

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not
visit
us very often so it is
really
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a really

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special family get together
event
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an event

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that I cannot afford to miss. By the way, my business would be
little
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a little

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slow in coming summers, I could make a
visit
to you at that
time
,
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apply

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if it is convenient to you. I will have even more
time
to
spent
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spend

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with you and cover the attractions. Once again I am sorry from the bottom of my heart for the inconvenience caused. Hope you understand my situation. see you soon. Warm Regards Daniel
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