Students at universities often have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live in apartments in the community. Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the community. Where would you prefer to live? Give reasons for your preference.

It is clear
form
a giver or sender
from
the topic that the
university
students have a choice to live either in a
university
campus or in an apartment. Both have
advanrages
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantages
.
This
essay will discuss about the merits of living students in dormitories and
also
give some merits of living in apartments. In
this
regard, I would like to give my reasons to support my view.
Firstly
, to live in
university
housing, students gets lots of benefits,
such
as, they will easily connect with the professors, communicate with other students, so that, they develop their communication skills.
Secondly
, in
University
campus, the internet is easily accessible.
However
, students can easily
found
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find
their study materials through it.
thirdly
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Thirdly
, library facilities are
also
available in dormitories. Students acquire knowledge by studying books in
library
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the library
.
Moreover
,
trasportation
a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
is
also
not necessary by staying at
university campus
Suggestion
the university campus
.
In contrast
to
this
, to live in
apartmnets
a suite of rooms usually on one floor of an apartment house
apartments
, has
also
some advantages.
here
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Here
, students can choose their rooms according to their needs.
Furthermore
, their study time will be adjusted according to their time. They should not be disturbed by anybody.
For example
, if someone has habit to study ay night, in
this
case, they can easily read by staying
at
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in
apartments.
because
Suggestion
Because
, no one is there to disturb them. Another reason is that students can save money to live in apartments.
but
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But
, it is obvious to say that staying alone in dormitories may create
stree
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Stree
stress
, feeling of loneliness amongst the students.
to
Suggestion
To
sum up, in my opinion, I would like to prefer to live in
university
housing. The reason is that I preferably like to make friends. In
this
regard, I might get
helpp
give help or assistance; be of service
help
with the friends
ans
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
ai
expresses position, direction or location, or point in time
at
a
I
least
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
donot
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do not
have the feeling of loneliness. So, better to live in
university
campus rather than in apartments.
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